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happy holidays to you
you are the best of the best.god bless.
posted by
muley12
on December 27, 2008 at 12:34 AM
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Beautiful, honest and uplifting
I am a poor visitor, for I often am absent for long periods as daily life consumes my attention and I have time only for the barest of courtesies, but a visit to your blog is always a treat I savour. You talent is as deep as your heart is big, and both are a joy to behold. Bravo, my dear
posted by
lionreign
on December 26, 2008 at 9:35 AM
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I am with you PURPLE M. Your detractors and despoilers are my enemies! LUV
DAVE!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 24, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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Rising the bar! To obtain knowledge of self, wisdom, you become master.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 24, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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Merry Christmas Sweetie! Hugs . Time is cluttered with so much to do reading is intermittent!May you have a woderful Christmas of beauty and peace and an amazing New year of joy!
posted by
merkie
on December 24, 2008 at 8:59 AM
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Merry Christmas!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 23, 2008 at 6:29 PM
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your good tastes in color has definately been coming out in these picture-poems, mermaid!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on December 23, 2008 at 2:57 PM
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Superb!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 23, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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Title--Master of? Can't read, which is probably endemnic to the piece. Love how you are striding thru your stanzas, letting each one develop as unique and tightly threaded to the piece. Your language is fresh and startling (as if words could have double indemnity!):
Stanza 1: invalid interface struggling in dead beat (first read it as deadbeat, a person of no consequence, which I like a bit better). But an invalid interface, works like a flashing mirror (into its own media)
St 2: Predators of my relaxing hours... the last time I heard something like this was Dylan Thomas's, "Don't walk gentlly into that good night" (and his only poem I like) and I'm remined of it here.
This is an exciting piece.
posted by
jfm32
on December 23, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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HAPPY HOLIDAYS MEME!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on December 23, 2008 at 7:34 AM
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Always beautiful
'my future is mine' - good words to have as a new year awaits our orders. have a delicious merry christmas.thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 23, 2008 at 4:41 AM
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Strength lies within
Absoultely right. Have a good Christmas.
posted by
malcolm
on December 23, 2008 at 4:02 AM
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Very ture !
posted by
afzal50
on December 23, 2008 at 3:59 AM
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Mermaid, I managed to open it at the office where the computer set-up is more sophisticated. it was beautiful..as is this one.
posted by
adnohr
on December 22, 2008 at 11:34 AM
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Mermaid, you have a Merry Christmas, too, and keep sharing your
writings with us...
...
posted by
Rumor
on December 22, 2008 at 8:27 AM
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Mermaid
I hadn't stopped in for a few days, so I didn't know about the problem with the media posts, but if it helps you to make more works of art it will be so worth it! Beautiful poem, your cleverness and creativity never fail to stun me!
posted by
calia14
on December 22, 2008 at 7:24 AM
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Catching up with you
I like the poems on the art.. they are beautiful ~Peace
posted by
Blue_feathers
on December 22, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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happy holidays to you
wish in my whole life time i could write like you. Again your wonderful.love ya.
posted by
muley12
on December 22, 2008 at 4:07 AM
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Beautifully done my dear Jen
I personally have had no problem opening your recent posts forunately! Many blessings and thanks and happy holidays my friend
posted by
mariaki
on December 22, 2008 at 3:03 AM
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... I am the master of my own fleet...
Another great piece from you, sweetie Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on December 22, 2008 at 2:00 AM
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Again another beautiful thought
penned with your wonderful words. Merry Christmas.
posted by
skye08
on December 21, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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