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Re: Great write you went so deep. Great
Thank you so much Mystereo! chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 29, 2008 at 9:17 AM
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Great write you went so deep. Great
posted by
Mystereo
on December 28, 2008 at 9:11 AM
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Re: Thank you so much EX TURPI! Much appreciated. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 22, 2008 at 1:11 PM
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Re: Such a beautiful vision Chris!
Thank you mariaki--I'm pleased you like it! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 22, 2008 at 1:01 PM
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What stark contrast and precise effect!!
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 22, 2008 at 6:17 AM
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Such a beautiful vision Chris!
lovely piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 22, 2008 at 2:34 AM
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Re: I must admit Lustor-that it was not easy doing this one-in only three
lines and I had wondered whether to 'expand' it? For me-the-'huge dark mushroom'-was just as the skies looked the other evening-together with the stars-ie;'smothered in tiny star lights'--the 'tear drop' are those we shed here on earth-'reflected' by the stars! Don't know if that helps-or if my mind is playing 'tricks'? I'm pleased you made this comment!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 21, 2008 at 12:14 PM
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Re: Dry, crisp snow in moonlight or street lamp light....
Yes-it could be Decshak--Thank you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 21, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Re: Thank you so much Sam! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 21, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Re: Thank you Sinome--I can just picture it-Lovely.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 21, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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Re: Vividly vivid :)! - Ash
Thank you Ash! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 21, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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I dont get this one sorry
posted by
Lanetay
on December 21, 2008 at 10:32 AM
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Dry, crisp snow in moonlight or street lamp light....
posted by
WindTapper
on December 21, 2008 at 9:23 AM
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Perfect! I read several times it is so good! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 20, 2008 at 11:03 PM
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Gorgeous Chris :-) There is a chandelier in my family room that at a certain time every day, I call it the magical hour to my grandkids, gets hit by the sun light and bursts into a rainbow of little tinny color dots all over the walls and the ceiling..This poem reminded me of that :-) Lovely HAiku :-)
posted by
Sinome
on December 20, 2008 at 3:02 PM
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Vividly vivid :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 20, 2008 at 2:40 PM
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