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oh! wow! all said in so litttle

posted by bythewindowsill on February 5, 2009 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

keep writing!!! you have a lovely gift!!

posted by Itza on January 29, 2009 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Can I share a post Seeds 3rd poem 3rd page i'll read whn you post thank you

posted by Mystereo on January 24, 2009 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Good work!

posted by _teddypoet_ on December 22, 2008 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply

Intriguing and imaginative!

 

posted by PoetRaye on December 22, 2008 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

that is a lot of power and impact

for so few words.  I like this a lot, it makes me think and I agree with Sam444 - that is always a good thing

posted by lionreign on December 22, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

I liked this! It got me thinking and that is always a good thing! Thank you! sam

posted by sam444 on December 20, 2008 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on December 20, 2008 at 9:23 PM | link to this | reply

Nice ....thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on December 20, 2008 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, if you are expressing your delight with kids.

posted by EX_TURPI on December 20, 2008 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Gift of the pen use create worldsand release pressure fromthe soul venting.

posted by Mystereo on December 20, 2008 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Hi there

This poem immediately brought to mind when my children were small and we had little - yet no matter how difficult the times, their voices would always hold me. We always loved each other. Thank you for evoking that memory.  Geraldine

posted by pernesegirl1 on December 20, 2008 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply