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Even whe you are plating you have great creativity.

posted by Mystereo on January 1, 2009 at 2:55 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is just too cute! I had to read it again! sam

posted by sam444 on December 25, 2008 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

A delicious platter indeed!

posted by merkie on December 22, 2008 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

Yes it is! I loved the onomatopoeia too! sam

posted by sam444 on December 19, 2008 at 6:53 PM | link to this | reply

  • But the answer never known simply grows fatter. This is just he best line ever!  There are infinite possibilities in this one little line.  This is a wonderfully fun little piece.  I laughed out loud in finishing the read.  Thank you for nudging my long, lost funny bone!  Bravo to you.
  • posted by asign on December 19, 2008 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

    A tongue twister? Says a lot.

    posted by EX_TURPI on December 19, 2008 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

    Ruby
    A delicious platter, indeed! 

    posted by Troosha on December 19, 2008 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

    SOUNDS LIKE A FEAST , THANKS, KENT

    posted by Riversidepoet on December 19, 2008 at 7:33 AM | link to this | reply

    Yummm....the suspense makes it even more delicious!

    posted by Straightforward on December 19, 2008 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

    I love the pace and cadence of this
    It's so engaging and fun

    posted by lionreign on December 19, 2008 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

    rubypoem ~.~
    ...such a delightful piece. I truly enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

    posted by soulspeaker on December 19, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

    I really enjoyed it ruby.

    posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 19, 2008 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

    Aint it just my friend!
    lovely and light for the start of a great weekend! Many blessings and thanks; enjoy yours

    posted by mariaki on December 19, 2008 at 3:53 AM | link to this | reply

    Very engaging and lyrical!
     

    posted by Katray2 on December 18, 2008 at 11:25 PM | link to this | reply

    Such fun!  I like the flitter-flutter effect.  

    posted by calia14 on December 18, 2008 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply