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You to deep for me but I hear you plead, heartful yet complalling,
posted by
Mystereo
on December 31, 2008 at 8:35 PM
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MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR 2 U AND U'RS
posted by
Justi
on December 24, 2008 at 2:21 AM
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Very well put across! Your efficient use of repitition is very effective!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 21, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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I think it is very expressive!! When you stir the reader you have done your job! Kudos to you! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 19, 2008 at 10:56 AM
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powerfully angry.i did enjoy the print change for the birth.it hits the mark.thank you for the read.
posted by
rubypoem
on December 19, 2008 at 3:47 AM
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RITE2SPIN
This is excellent. It covers it all. So many see only one side of racism it has so many facets. You have covered so many of them. The world insists that racial pain has to be a color, white is never hurt, hungry, damaged by slurs, violence how very unknowing most of the people who are screaming really are. Beautiful - record it.
posted by
Justi
on December 19, 2008 at 2:46 AM
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The last few lines were touching!
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 18, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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by the way xeno since i've been alive it has not been real easy being a white man because of cry baby belly acking old farts like your self. Your problem is you think you know every thing and you don't know shit.
posted by
RITE2SPIN
on December 18, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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Re: it'd be nice except
What would be nice is if you would practice what you preach you old cry baby
posted by
RITE2SPIN
on December 18, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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it'd be nice except
it's still going on
unless you're African American you really don't know.
and I think, what you don't know about, you shouldn't write about
posted by
Xeno-x
on December 18, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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