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You to deep for me but I hear you plead, heartful yet complalling,

posted by Mystereo on December 31, 2008 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR 2 U AND U'RS

posted by Justi on December 24, 2008 at 2:21 AM | link to this | reply

Very well put across! Your efficient use of repitition is very effective!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 21, 2008 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

I think it is very expressive!! When you stir the reader you have done your job! Kudos to you! sam

posted by sam444 on December 19, 2008 at 10:56 AM | link to this | reply

powerfully angry.i did enjoy the print change for the birth.it hits the mark.thank you for the read.

posted by rubypoem on December 19, 2008 at 3:47 AM | link to this | reply

RITE2SPIN

This is excellent. It covers it all. So many see only one side of racism it has so many facets. You have covered so many of them. The world insists that racial pain has to be a color, white is never hurt, hungry, damaged by slurs, violence how very unknowing most of the people who are screaming really are. Beautiful - record it.

posted by Justi on December 19, 2008 at 2:46 AM | link to this | reply

The last few lines were touching!

posted by ash_pradhan on December 18, 2008 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

 by the way xeno since i've been alive it has not been real easy being a white man because of cry baby belly acking old farts like your self. Your problem is you think you know every thing and you don't know shit.

posted by RITE2SPIN on December 18, 2008 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: it'd be nice except

 What would be nice is if you would practice what you preach you old cry baby

posted by RITE2SPIN on December 18, 2008 at 10:43 AM | link to this | reply

it'd be nice except

it's still going on

unless you're African American you really don't know.

and I think, what you don't know about, you shouldn't write about

posted by Xeno-x on December 18, 2008 at 10:17 AM | link to this | reply