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Mystereo
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December 20, 2008
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What a metaphor! I've had relationships like that before. Great poem, I'm digging the theme and the way you put the carnival music in the mifddle of it.
posted by
calia14
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December 17, 2008
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Re: thank you
Thank you so much for all your imput and for taking intrest in my work I've just started to get active as far as reading blogs is concerned and I look forward to reading more of your work as I think you are very well versed and look foward to posting more...thanks again
posted by
dathippiekid
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December 17, 2008
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This poem is absolutely a delight! What a great theme too! sam
posted by
sam444
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December 17, 2008
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