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Hands down! Oh my God you bring so much everthing I can't stop thinking.
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Mystereo
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December 18, 2008
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Awesome work, Dear Purple..Take care, feel better soon!
posted by
PoetRaye
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December 17, 2008
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The words, the presentation..all so nice. And so real. Congrats, & feel better soon.
posted by
adnohr
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December 17, 2008
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You are enviably creative; a fertile mind.
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EX_TURPI
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December 17, 2008
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Very wise poem - strangely enough - somebody very close to me, has just been in that kind of situation.
posted by
elinjo
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December 17, 2008
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hope you feel better soon!!I can almost hear the sad song she plays...Bravo Jen!
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 17, 2008
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Take care!
posted by
afzal50
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December 17, 2008
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Very well done my dear Jen
highly expressive imagery present here; superb piece; hope you feel better soon my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
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December 17, 2008
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Healing thoughts your way

and again a very excellent expression of yourself. Barbara Brannon in "Hands of Light" states that fear is caused by our reaction in the past and fear it will reoccur in the future. If we can ask ourselves: "Are we afraid at this very moment?" If we can evaluate this very second in time and how we feel and say no then fear cannot find us. Love and fear cannot exist within the same moment. So if you are not afraid in that very second in time then you are in a moment of Love. Stay in Love

and be surrounded by the Light.
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skye08
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December 17, 2008
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Hope its all OK!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 16, 2008
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This is wonderful Jen. TAke care of yourself sweetie... xoxo
posted by
Sinome
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December 16, 2008
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Beautiful!
Background and words alike. Thanks for sharing! Feel better soon.
posted by
Fledgeling_Phoenix
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December 16, 2008
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Awesome language love.
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BC-A
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December 16, 2008
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