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Hands down! Oh my God you bring so much everthing I can't stop thinking.

posted by Mystereo on December 18, 2008 at 7:51 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome work, Dear Purple..Take care, feel better soon!
  

posted by Katray2 on December 17, 2008 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

The words, the presentation..all so nice. And so real. Congrats, & feel better soon.

posted by adnohr on December 17, 2008 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

You are enviably creative; a fertile mind.

posted by EX_TURPI on December 17, 2008 at 12:07 PM | link to this | reply

Very wise poem - strangely enough - somebody very close to me, has just been in that kind of situation.

posted by elinjo on December 17, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

hope you feel better soon!!I can almost hear the sad song she plays...Bravo Jen!

posted by Wigopa_ on December 17, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Take care!

posted by afzal50 on December 17, 2008 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Very well done my dear Jen
highly expressive imagery present here; superb piece; hope you feel better soon my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on December 17, 2008 at 3:12 AM | link to this | reply

Healing thoughts your way
and again a very excellent expression of yourself.  Barbara Brannon in "Hands of Light" states that fear is caused by our reaction in the past and fear it will reoccur in the future. If we can ask ourselves: "Are we afraid at this very moment?"  If we can evaluate this very second in time and how we feel and say no then fear cannot find us.  Love and fear cannot exist within the same moment.  So if you are not afraid in that very second in time then you are in a moment of Love.  Stay in Love  and be surrounded by the Light.

posted by skye08 on December 17, 2008 at 12:48 AM | link to this | reply

Hope its all OK!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 16, 2008 at 11:52 PM | link to this | reply

This is wonderful Jen.  TAke care of yourself sweetie... xoxo

posted by Sinome on December 16, 2008 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!
Background and words alike. Thanks for sharing! Feel better soon.

posted by Fledgeling_Phoenix on December 16, 2008 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome language love.

posted by BC-A on December 16, 2008 at 7:55 PM | link to this | reply