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Re: A great piece of work
Thanks so much Geraldine! I feel like I have, damned if I'll keep my mouth shut next time, though!
posted by
calia14
on December 18, 2008 at 2:15 PM
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A great piece of work
And so clever and meaningful. You are not alone in ignoring the obvious to avoid a fight, lots of us do. I hope you have survived your crushing and bounced back.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 18, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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I appreciate the feedback Merkie and dathippiekid!
posted by
calia14
on December 17, 2008 at 9:06 PM
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Nice...
Awesomely fun read and skillful and crafty word choice...love it
posted by
dathippiekid
on December 17, 2008 at 8:59 PM
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This makes an incredible impression! Lol fun to read
posted by
merkie
on December 17, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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Re: wigopa
Thanks!
posted by
calia14
on December 17, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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A most splendid metaphor/poem...Perfect work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 17, 2008 at 8:24 PM
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Thanks RomaKay and lionsreign!
posted by
calia14
on December 17, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on December 17, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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Clever and thought provoking and yet
it made me laugh too - fantastic write, well done indeed!
posted by
lionreign
on December 17, 2008 at 2:39 AM
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Re: sinome
Thanks Sinome!
posted by
calia14
on December 16, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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Re: (speechless)
I really appreciate your comment!
posted by
calia14
on December 16, 2008 at 8:25 PM
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(speechless)
i don't say this everyday but "Wow!" what a powerful way of stating it. it's obvious and subtle, a unique turn on a cliche, dry and yet poetic, i could go on and on!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on December 16, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Totally awesome metaphor... Absolutely loved it. It is brilliantly conceived and executed... Bravo Calia! Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on December 16, 2008 at 8:57 AM
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Re: Are you sane this is off the wall, wow creativity rising the bar!
Thanks a lot mystereo!
posted by
calia14
on December 16, 2008 at 7:45 AM
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Re: sam
Thanks a lot sam! I've found that some problems get a chance to get stronger when they're ignored. I don't like to confront problems, I try to just let things go, and that's been coming back to bite me lately. I wrote this poem to express that.
posted by
calia14
on December 16, 2008 at 7:44 AM
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Are you sane this is off the wall, wow creativity rising the bar!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 16, 2008 at 7:27 AM
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This is awesome. I have always preferred ignore me and I will go away, but crushing is a good second! I love your surprise endings! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 15, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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Re: very wise writing....
Thanks a lot 9star
posted by
calia14
on December 15, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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very wise writing....
posted by
Star5_
on December 15, 2008 at 7:22 PM
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