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If I can just stop laughing,ok great peom again,punch me out ending. Awsome
posted by
Mystereo
on December 20, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Awwww!
So sad
posted by
calia14
on December 17, 2008 at 10:38 PM
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Oh this is heart braking... You have such talent to bring your reader into your story... I almost felt those shears!... Beautiful images and metaphors... Fantastic all around, but Oh so sad :-(
posted by
Sinome
on December 15, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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Oh no. Very sad.
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 15, 2008 at 8:03 AM
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You always seem to have such an intriguing ending. I am so taken with the awesome rhyme scheme that sets up the cadence and the insertion of personification was outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 14, 2008 at 7:34 PM
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Your writing flows so smoothly & tenderly! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 14, 2008 at 6:10 PM
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excellent cadence and ryhthm to this....very thought out with superb imagery..Bravo!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 14, 2008 at 11:10 AM
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You write with such easy flow and grace...
...that being said, this poem is a real gut-check!
Makes me wonder who'll be tossing me to the dirt when I get old.
posted by
metalrat
on December 14, 2008 at 10:06 AM
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Geraldine ~.~
This is such a wonderful write and the imagery is fabulous...each line perfectly crafted. Thanks so much for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 14, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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