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Re: Thank you merkie! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 15, 2008 at 9:03 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely Chris. The seasons passing enthrall !

posted by merkie on December 14, 2008 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Wonderful haiku
So pleased you like it Kolekshuns! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 14, 2008 at 7:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you so much wigopa! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 14, 2008 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: The season's clocks keep ticking... that's well put
Many thanks Straightforward! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 14, 2008 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Many thanks Purple Mermaid! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 14, 2008 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful haiku
 Fall is my favorite time of the year.  Thanks.

posted by Kolekshuns on December 14, 2008 at 3:09 AM | link to this | reply

I can almost here the Ticking...Wonderful work Chris!

posted by Wigopa_ on December 13, 2008 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

The season's clocks keep ticking... that's well put

posted by Straightforward on December 13, 2008 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

made me feel the winter breeze out there my dear...clarity of imagery...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on December 13, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: How right you are Riversidepoet! Thank you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply

HOW WONDERFUL THE SEASONS ARE, WHAT A LOVELY WORLD OUR GOD HAS MADE, THANKS, KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 13, 2008 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you so much Sam! I'm so pleased. Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Very well done!
Many thanks indeed teddypoet! Your comment is much appreciated! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

An awesome exposition! The clock does tick away! sam

posted by sam444 on December 13, 2008 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

Very well done!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on December 13, 2008 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Very many thanks Sinome-I'm pleased you like it! So long as you/we-
don't fall from the 'dizziness?' Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I really like this one Chris
Thank you OTA! A bit like 'me' I feel! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This is true and the perfect Haiku for this time this season.
Thank you so much Mystereo! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 13, 2008 at 10:06 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent as always Chris...  Loved it! reading it was like walking through the revolving door of time... one which seems to be going faster and faster around for me the older I get :-(  loll  Well at least I get a nice buzz out of the dizziness  loll... Seriously, superb work, I hereby crown you Queen of Haikus

posted by Sinome on December 13, 2008 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

I really like this one Chris
the baby become the old man... again and again..  ~Peace

posted by Blue_feathers on December 13, 2008 at 5:13 AM | link to this | reply

This is true and the perfect Haiku for this time this season.

posted by Mystereo on December 13, 2008 at 4:57 AM | link to this | reply