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Sinome
Another one of your beautiful and touching love poems...
posted by
Nautikos
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December 13, 2008
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Wow..is that me?...hahaha...lovely :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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December 13, 2008
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Sinome
Now if those aren’t words from the soul, I don’t know what is?! I was so very touched by the depth of your love conveyed in this piece. But remember, without him there is still you – a well of self-created rainbows, and sunsets filled with the colour of you.
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Troosha
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December 13, 2008
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I am drunk, just a lil too much drunk, to say anything to what you have donel (in this poem), to inspire. So my ocean kissed sands, do give your cool desert sand prince ... some time to think ... reading and savoring the feelings before he can make a comment adequate. Tell me, princesss is 'adequate' right?. I don't know. I just don't know. xoxo to you from so far across the world, to you and your's.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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December 13, 2008
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Excellent portrayal of a desolate soul.
posted by
hardilaziz
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December 13, 2008
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A lovely poem.......an epicenter around which everything else revolves. enjoyed the read
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posted by
shamasehar
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December 13, 2008
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If you were not here.....I would not write !
posted by
afzal50
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December 13, 2008
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A most awesome love poem....You and troosha are on a roll!!!!!
posted by
Wigopa_
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December 13, 2008
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Oh what a beautiful love poem...
I love this one..~Peace
posted by
OTA.
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December 12, 2008
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Such devotion so beautifully expressed!
Lovely work as always, my friend.
posted by
metalrat
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December 12, 2008
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I'd say an engagement is near!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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December 12, 2008
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Sinome
"You are what inspires me to try
" and Kabu is she that inspires me to keep on breathing, and you inspire me with your words of love, straight from your heart and soul, so beautifully written.
posted by
WileyJohn
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December 12, 2008
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Thoughts intertwining in a clever dance of the importance of your love .Again a poem immensely beautiful!
posted by
merkie
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December 12, 2008
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This brought tears to my eyes I just kept thinking of Wiley
posted by
Kabu
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December 12, 2008
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I loved the congruity and the all encompassing celestial beauty that was wrapped about in lovely similes! Stunning imagery! I read it twice just because i is so stunning! Love you! sammie
xoxooxoxo
posted by
sam444
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December 12, 2008
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love yeah........
posted by
9STAR
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December 12, 2008
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love yeah........
posted by
9STAR
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December 12, 2008
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wonderfully powerful love poem...beautiful...xxxxxoooooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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December 12, 2008
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