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All in a days work it is said!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on December 12, 2008 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply

Well done. I like the temptation to follow imagination innovation >You have a grand choice of words.Kudos!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:51 PM | link to this | reply

You keep writing like this you can get one, great piece.

posted by Mystereo on December 12, 2008 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

You can create imagery! I read it twice. It is loaded with great imagery and poignant thoughts. Kudos over and over! sam

posted by sam444 on December 12, 2008 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

A most excellent write, with wonderful rhythm..

posted by Wigopa_ on December 12, 2008 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

VERY NICELY WRITTEN, THANKS, KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on December 12, 2008 at 8:03 AM | link to this | reply

I like this
some great phrases and it carries a strong atmosphere - good job

posted by lionreign on December 12, 2008 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

Ruby
Gotta take the “mundane” with the inspired – it’s all part of life’s tossed salad.  

posted by Troosha on December 12, 2008 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

Very nice.
 Thanks for sharing.Clapping

posted by Kolekshuns on December 12, 2008 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply