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Depression is something I know all too well about.
thanks jen just catching up on life. you have a way. that always makes me feel good inside.rhea
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muley12
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December 12, 2008
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Tempting
Your poem is tempting all the senses. It's highly seductive and evocative. A lovely piece.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
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December 12, 2008
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beautiful
posted by
skye08
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December 12, 2008
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Purple Mermaid, u are superb!
posted by
Straightforward
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December 12, 2008
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Hey, hey, Mermaid!
Lucky is he who will ultimately do this for you! Good work!
posted by
strat
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December 12, 2008
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You are truly very profound and express your thoughts so well .
posted by
afzal50
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December 12, 2008
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Encore! You grab mind, please my heart and temp my soul. Beautiful!
posted by
Mystereo
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December 11, 2008
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Ah Jen... just fantastically done... Wine and love what better subjects !!! Lovely poem my friend.. written by a lovely poetess. xoxoxo
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Sinome
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December 11, 2008
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wow, what a pretty!!!!
posted by
9STAR
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December 11, 2008
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Liked how you slowed the blinking lights down, and I had a good read>
Still getting this feeling I'm riding on the seat of my pants. Exquisit vulgarity of Art, turning all my preconceptions inside out...not that I'd like it for wall paper, which is why a gallery exists. Instictive, opressive, uniquely original, and troublesome to any preconception of Art.
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jfm32
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December 11, 2008
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Sensual and lilting work!
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PoetRaye
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December 11, 2008
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Oooh so tempting!
Your making me want a glass of wine and its only 1pm! Hey, I have the day off, maybe...after all, its rainy, yucky, and I'm home with my hubby...
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calia14
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December 11, 2008
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