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Absolutely Beautifull mariaki! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 15, 2008 at 1:49 PM
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Master Piece!Your content, concept your whole being inwords light the world
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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"Arms outstretched I believe I can fly
I can touch the moon and stars in this sky
Whatever I desire will come to be
For in the face of the moon I see me"Yes! Love this concept in being!freely fly!
posted by
merkie
on December 12, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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Very beautiful, Mariaki!
posted by
Katray2
on December 11, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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I reached for the moon and found
All I desire is here on the ground {I adore this to no end!}
Striking and poignant imagery! This is a fantastic poem Mariaki! Peace and blessings! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on December 11, 2008 at 1:54 PM
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Splendid wisdom ...
... a beautiful and sensitive poem with great knowledge - I'm on this universe travel myself sometimes before coming back ... and then finding the greatness in the small 'things' - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on December 11, 2008 at 12:57 PM
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Brilliant
That last verse is just so right. It's cheered me up after a very long day...
posted by
malcolm
on December 11, 2008 at 9:22 AM
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Well put, my friend!
Great message written very well
posted by
lionreign
on December 11, 2008 at 8:40 AM
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so beautifully written, and very true words, it is up to us!!lovely. thank you
posted by
rubypoem
on December 11, 2008 at 6:23 AM
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mariaki
Very soulfully written that has a lasting appeal. This reminded me of Keats' Ode to a Nightingale ... And the Queen moon is haply on her throne with all her starry fays
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on December 11, 2008 at 5:32 AM
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Very true.... thanks for reminding us
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 11, 2008 at 4:26 AM
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Maria ~.~
Beautifully written...and very true. Our true happiness is dependent on our own endeavors. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on December 11, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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