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Absolutely Beautifull mariaki! Chris.

posted by Scramble on December 15, 2008 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply

Master Piece!Your content, concept your whole being inwords light the world

posted by Mystereo on December 13, 2008 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

"Arms outstretched I believe I can fly

I can touch the moon and stars in this sky

Whatever I desire will come to be

For in the face of the moon I see me"Yes! Love this concept in being!freely fly!

posted by merkie on December 12, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful, Mariaki!

  

posted by PoetRaye on December 11, 2008 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

I reached for the moon and found

All I desire is here on the ground {I adore this to no end!}

 Striking and poignant imagery! This is a fantastic poem Mariaki! Peace and blessings! Shelly

posted by sam444 on December 11, 2008 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

Splendid wisdom ...

... a beautiful and sensitive poem with great knowledge - I'm on this universe travel myself sometimes before coming back ... and then finding the greatness in the small 'things' -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on December 11, 2008 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Brilliant

That last verse is just so right. It's cheered me up after a very long day...

posted by malcolm on December 11, 2008 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Well put, my friend!

Great message written very well

posted by lionreign on December 11, 2008 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

so beautifully written, and very true words, it is up to us!!lovely. thank you

posted by rubypoem on December 11, 2008 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

mariaki

Very soulfully written that has a lasting appeal. This reminded me of Keats' Ode to a Nightingale ... And the Queen moon is haply on her throne with all her starry fays .

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 11, 2008 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

Very true.... thanks for reminding us

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on December 11, 2008 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

Maria ~.~

Beautifully written...and very true. Our true happiness is dependent on our own endeavors. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on December 11, 2008 at 3:40 AM | link to this | reply