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Awsome! You touch my heart a slight tear, mind blowing great content!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 12, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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Loved the feel and style of this one!
posted by
Wigopa_
on December 9, 2008 at 8:13 PM
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I too agree with Mariaki
this has an endearing sing-song quality
posted by
lionreign
on December 9, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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Something to consider.
Thanks for the reminder.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on December 8, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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Love your ending. Also different shades of blue!Well done ruby!
posted by
merkie
on December 8, 2008 at 7:01 PM
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Very cute and effective language.
posted by
BC-A
on December 8, 2008 at 3:43 PM
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Nice ....thanks
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on December 8, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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I loved that! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on December 8, 2008 at 1:34 PM
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Nice...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on December 8, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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Ruby
I especially liked your closing line….
posted by
Troosha
on December 8, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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This was a grand write and I agree with Mariaki! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 8, 2008 at 6:56 AM
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What a lovely write my friend!
I found myself singing it rather than reading it! Splendid piece; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on December 8, 2008 at 5:20 AM
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