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Awsome! Jewel, seeds, for relations life and love pent of light. Godspeed!
I'm trying not to write but you capture all my emotions you have a wondeful gift. Amazing! Paper, pens of swords.
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Mystereo
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December 5, 2008
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Confident and bold lines capable of wooing and converting a die-hard pessimist.
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hardilaziz
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December 4, 2008
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pretty as always!!
posted by
9STAR
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December 4, 2008
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How Beautiful
Your words are so lovely and touching. I just read them out loud to my beloved who was equally mesmerised by them, the depth and feeling that flowed from the poem. I hope to read much more of your work.
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December 4, 2008
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SOME DARKENED CAVE AND LOCK ITSELF INSIDE, GREAT LINES IN THIS POEM, THANKS, KENT
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Riversidepoet
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December 4, 2008
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stunning
this is utterly beautiful and intensely romantic - I adore it
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lionreign
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December 4, 2008
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What wonderful words.
There's nothing as powerful as love!
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Kolekshuns
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December 4, 2008
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untamed wildness...BEAUTIFUl poem !!!!!
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hazel_st_cricket
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December 4, 2008
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Indescribably beautiful thoughts and words; thanks for sharing. God bless. Nita.
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snowview
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December 4, 2008
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Having lived this kind of love not once but twice my dear Sinome
I can totally relate to this dream/hope and apart from this being the most beautiful poem, I would say carry on dreaming the dream and never give up hope ever - this kind of love DOES exist; many blessings and thanks for sharing this beauty
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mariaki
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December 4, 2008
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A wonderful dream, but it is so much better when it is a reality that you
are describing, rather than a hope. Hopes are often only dreams best forgotten....
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_Decshak
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December 4, 2008
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You enthrall with enlightenment and the seasoning of experience. Bravo Marta excellent images entice the desire for more.
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merkie
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December 3, 2008
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This just kind of occured to me while reading. This Lover you write about, and experience such languge as might come--who is whom, the lover or the love? What is projected from iside out as if to love a form, might just be a reflection of what love is, eternal and no more.
Upon the Waters of Reflection, is there a Song of Songs? Where rapture beats the heart without image? Can there be a song of songs?
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jfm32
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December 3, 2008
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Sinome, my princess of the OK sands
This line popped out for me, and I contemplated on it for quite a while, found it profound and exquisite ... I am that in yourself which you love most but are scared of .. .Why, this is so true and it spoke to me. xoxo
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Bhaskar.ing
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December 3, 2008
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Sinome...This just brought tears to my eyes...This is simply outstanding work.....Truly one of the most beautiful things I have read in a long while...
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Wigopa_
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December 3, 2008
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Kiss me once and your sun shall never set again.
Man alive Sinome, this is fabulous! There are so many wonderful lines in this poem! The imagery sticks to my soul darlin'! I held fast to the line I selected because I thought it to be very powerful and what a statement of love! Kudos! Pluto is out there looking at you!
xoxoxoxo Sammy
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sam444
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December 3, 2008
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Wonderful!
"I shall hold your hand and we shall be one soul -
finished and made perfect."
Isn't this what we all long for?
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Sunnybeach7
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December 3, 2008
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