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Sunshine makes decision easier Yes!We think more clearly than in dark tough times.
posted by
merkie
on December 1, 2008 at 9:22 PM
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Re: BC-A
You know, I really didn't think of it like that! Wonderful extrapolation, I was thinking of my own small daily financial crises slightly, but I didn't think of the storm as being a hurricane.
posted by
calia14
on December 1, 2008 at 3:31 PM
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Re: sam44
Thanks Sam! Indecision is one of the most uncomfortable feelings when you're in a tough spot-things are not always black and white.
posted by
calia14
on December 1, 2008 at 3:29 PM
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So often there -- a wonderful description -- I hope your ray of light dawns on you.
posted by
mariss9
on December 1, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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Aah it looks like a description of the economy *
posted by
BC-A
on December 1, 2008 at 12:16 PM
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You nailed it for me as indecision reigns in the conclusion. It captured my mind! Wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 1, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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oooh. love it! just enough to let one's mind wander far.
posted by
RomaKay
on December 1, 2008 at 9:51 AM
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Great effort!
posted by
hardilaziz
on December 1, 2008 at 6:42 AM
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Yes, confusion dawns!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 30, 2008 at 11:21 PM
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WOW!!
this is stirring as a storm brewing!very good!thank you for the read and your words.
posted by
rubypoem
on November 30, 2008 at 9:26 PM
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Ahhh..the storm approaches...Nicely done!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 30, 2008 at 7:59 PM
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