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Love for yourself can bring the light and chase away pity shadows.

posted by Mystereo on December 28, 2008 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

Love steals up on us. Yes it certainly does and when it does we do realise how empty we have been until then. Well captured. Geraldine

posted by pernesegirl1 on December 1, 2008 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

I AM NOTHING WITHOUT YOU....a recurring theme in Indian culture. If only things were different!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on November 30, 2008 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

Soulstirring thought this one!

posted by Wigopa_ on November 30, 2008 at 8:01 PM | link to this | reply

Makes you think, doesn't it?

posted by muley12 on November 30, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

I like the contrasts! It is an object of pity but somehow the surreptitiousness of the entrance made me want to see desire to be the opposite of pity, without fanfare. I just think it opens up great thought, and that is what I like in verse! sam

posted by sam444 on November 30, 2008 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Poignant and touching !!

posted by afzal50 on November 30, 2008 at 5:09 AM | link to this | reply

There is so much in so few words.. ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on November 30, 2008 at 3:38 AM | link to this | reply