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Love for yourself can bring the light and chase away pity shadows.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 28, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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Love steals up on us. Yes it certainly does and when it does we do realise how empty we have been until then. Well captured.
Geraldine
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 1, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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I AM NOTHING WITHOUT YOU....a recurring theme in Indian culture. If only things were different!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 30, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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Soulstirring thought this one!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 30, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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Makes you think, doesn't it?
posted by
muley12
on November 30, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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I like the contrasts! It is an object of pity but somehow the surreptitiousness of the entrance made me want to see desire to be the opposite of pity, without fanfare. I just think it opens up great thought, and that is what I like in verse! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 30, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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Poignant and touching !!
posted by
afzal50
on November 30, 2008 at 5:09 AM
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There is so much in so few words.. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 30, 2008 at 3:38 AM
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