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Here I come with my slow but you somehow was a secret to me no more.
Amazing just simply amazing so many awsome poets you hold a candle so high your flow content power creativity ect.ect.ect. Boom!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 2, 2008 at 4:44 PM
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the secret of heart !!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on November 29, 2008 at 4:18 PM
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Sinome
Priceless, and I cannot forget your poetry either luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 29, 2008 at 11:42 AM
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..feelings and memory are strong things indeed..
posted by
MasonGarrett
on November 29, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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Poignant and poignant again! This is magnificent! Love you darlin Sinome! How was your Thanksgiving?
xoxoxoxox... to infinity! Sammy
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2008 at 9:09 AM
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wow!
posted by
RomaKay
on November 29, 2008 at 7:44 AM
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Such a powerful and sincere expression of generous love.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 29, 2008 at 4:33 AM
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Oh my princess of the ocean kissed sands, you really made my feelings go hither and thither, kept me guessing all the time as I read, and as if I was on an unknown journey that ended with a twist of flourish "obvously I do not love you I cannot forget" Your desert prince is happy
and sends you his xoxos.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 29, 2008 at 12:34 AM
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Secret
Sinome does it again! Always your poems appeal to the heart of me, make me feel like you've seen what's there and expressed it ever so elegantly.
posted by
calia14
on November 28, 2008 at 5:07 PM
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Power of the mind! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 28, 2008 at 4:06 PM
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This is a great poem ...
...a great thought - I agree with you about not to forget : should we forget Hitler, Stalin wars, violence etc.
- it's from the past we learn about shaping the day today and tomorrow - Winston Churchill said (in my own words): "The only thing we've learned from our history is that we don't learn from it" - and that's one of the tragedies of humankind (have been so far) - but maybe we one day will remember so very well the past and ... learn from it - then we probably also can learn to forgive -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 28, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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The shape of the poem on the page enhances you poem so well. It seems the SECRET is in your mind,eyes, and the smile of your lips. I am left wondering how many admit to the secrets in life!
posted by
merkie
on November 28, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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I've read some great posts this evening
but this is the best by far. I salute you.
posted by
malcolm
on November 28, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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Sinome, You always put out so much heart in your poems. They are always a treat to read. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 28, 2008 at 10:42 AM
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Very well written..... heart felt and touching...xxxooo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on November 28, 2008 at 10:02 AM
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sincere
both bittersweet and very perplexing.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 28, 2008 at 9:57 AM
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I can feel the emotion in these words....Secrets are an interesting thing....Finding out what some are only to realize that you didn't want to know in the end...Changing the way you think of someone you love...Superb write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 28, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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I really enjoy your style.
posted by
shelly_b
on November 28, 2008 at 9:05 AM
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very good
posted by
Lanetay
on November 28, 2008 at 8:58 AM
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Sinome
Can’t decide if this was satisfying resolve or painful resignation…. Either way, in your usual graceful manner you brought the reader into your heart and soulful introspection. You have wonderful gift of doing that….
posted by
Troosha
on November 28, 2008 at 7:42 AM
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