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Exquisite imagery! I just had to fall into it one more time! Love you with the stars above that shine brightly! Sammy
xoxoxo
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sam444
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November 29, 2008
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Why do I feel lucid in this poem when when I'm never sure where I am?
It seems to have an implied base of perception (but who am I to pry?).
Yet, none of that seems to matter after I'm wisked off into the Archetypal while you are announcing your new ratios (something about men and women). More interesting still, is this thrill of heights, and looking down, noticing why in this poem the concrete is vague, and perhaps nondescript tho integrally related. And then to come down again--hey there is an earth! What a ride; let's do it agian!
posted by
jfm32
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November 27, 2008
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I enjoyed every line I became vivid with it you stepped up.
posted by
Mystereo
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November 26, 2008
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To have a romance like that...What a beautiful work of art this is...Powerful and a true pleasure to read!
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Wigopa_
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November 25, 2008
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for the child that loved you is now the woman who holds
your memory in the space of her heart where the
fine memories--the most precious memories, are stored
What an awesome ending! Other than that I am speechless! Happy Thanksgiving my dear Sinome! I will catch up with you on Friday! Love you so!! xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
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November 25, 2008
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the climax of your memories holds no bounds
posted by
Smittenheimer
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November 25, 2008
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A beautiful tribute to ...
... love - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
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November 25, 2008
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Lovely
Especially the conclusion.
posted by
malcolm
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November 25, 2008
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Truly Beautifull Sinome!! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 25, 2008
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..you leave me speechless...
...all I can do is throw flowers..
posted by
MasonGarrett
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November 25, 2008
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So wonderful
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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November 25, 2008
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Wow - what an outpouring of introspection and emotion! You must feel exhausted or renewed after writing a poem like this....
You spill your emotions out to us with such raw honesty, tenderness, and ease.
posted by
Troosha
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November 25, 2008
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Wonderful, Sinome.
An epic.
posted by
TAPS.
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November 25, 2008
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Incredible
This is a wonder and a delight - superb poem which just got printed and put on my fridge
posted by
lionreign
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November 25, 2008
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TO SHARE THE WEIGHT OF TEARS, YOU HAVE A KIND HEART, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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November 25, 2008
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Profound and nostalgic ...
posted by
afzal50
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November 25, 2008
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What a wonderful poem.
Very enjoyable.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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November 24, 2008
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achingly beautiful and brings back the memories of that painful first love
I met him years later. He was nothing like I remembered.
posted by
Kabu
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November 24, 2008
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Wow!
Yeah Wow!
posted by
Whacky
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November 24, 2008
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Princess Marta, your mythical prince to have these qualities
" ... your mind containing all
present and ancient knowledge and depth,
which woman, as woman, cannot know", and
"human and holy
until love explodes in a million blazing lights
of wonder and tired release" ..... this desert prince here finds brilliantly beautiful reminiscences. Take care of you xoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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November 24, 2008
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Very cool.......
Goosebumps, (bold and strong, Luscious depth).
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mindopensup
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November 24, 2008
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