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Re: WOW!
i'm honored that you'd like paper copies of these stories! i'll probably try to get them in a book at one point. i have many more that i just don't think are good enough (enjoyable enought) to show on here, but in the future i will try to see which ones i've posted were the best/most enjoyable. thanks for reading!

posted by Luz_Briar on November 24, 2008 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

WOW!
Brilliant ending <3 

So when are you making a book of these so I can have them on paper too?

posted by lionreign on November 24, 2008 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

What an awesome story and ending! I adore your work! sam

posted by sam444 on November 22, 2008 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work...get busy on the next one!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on November 21, 2008 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

name meanings (just for fun)

Salaah- a name whose origin I don't know of. It may be hebrew. In old Christian demonology "Salaah" is the demonic entity which "entices into the forest."

Mbali- African Zulu for "flower"

Epica- an 'original' name of mine. Phoenetically the sound i associate with this character "ep-i-ca."

Brul- another original name of mine. It's course-sounding, and misleading because Brul has no violent bone in his body.

Neuma- unsure of the origin of this very pretty name. He's named after one of my great-great-uncles, who i never had the pleasure of meeting. Most of the family were French, so I'm uncertain of the origin, though it possibly is a variation of the Russian "Naum", which roughly translates (and I mean Roughly) into hebrew for "comforter".

Sarah- biblical for "lady" and/or "princess."

Valiga- another original name of mine (at least I think, i've never seen it anywhere else). some unpleasant sounds thrown together, as anything with V, G, and A...

Balbin- the name "Balbina", according to behindthename.com can translate into Ancient Roman as "stammerer"...some trivia; the first official day of Winter this year Dec. 21 is the nameday of Balbin. Makes since if you ask me.

posted by Luz_Briar on November 21, 2008 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply