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A strong poem ...
... it's difficult to read it all because of the layout : white letters disappear when the background is white and, the kb/mb of the image/text make the letters vague - I hope it can help you in finding the right colour(s) and solution when you paste the pictures with the text (I also see it here and there on the other pictures you've used - it's commen problem for many in the beginning ... until you find your best/right way of uploading) - keep up your writing ! -
- genio
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ggXpress
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November 25, 2008
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meme......she is aware of everything
posted by
9STAR
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November 22, 2008
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You have such a wide experience of life . Thanks !
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afzal50
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November 22, 2008
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When at rock bottom, there's no way but up!
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Soul_Builder101
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November 21, 2008
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Jen..You are loved have no doubt of that from my end...Take care girl...We all take bumps and brusies...God would not give us something that we don't have the strength for...Hugs for you and

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I can feel your pain...

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Wigopa_
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November 21, 2008
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very brooding in heatache. You will find your strength again. Hope!
posted by
merkie
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November 21, 2008
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Poignant words Jen...Laden with pain and sorrow ... I hope this is empathy talking... Take it easy darlin' Everything will be OK. xoxo
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Sinome
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November 21, 2008
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Mermaid
Wow, that was intense.
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calia14
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November 21, 2008
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powerful imagery about resilience!

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Luz_Briar
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November 21, 2008
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How well I know
There is a pain that's deep within; the one cannot let go.'The pain is chained into my heart and the weight hangs heavy there........Alone and chained with an anchor of pain.skye2008(The Weight of Pain) Yet there is an inner strength that relieves the weight and dissolves the pain away.
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skye08
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November 21, 2008
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Bravo mermaid!
i really liked this!
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muley12
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November 21, 2008
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