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A strong poem ...

... it's difficult to read it all because of the layout : white letters disappear when the background is white and, the kb/mb of the image/text make the letters vague - I hope it can help you in finding the right colour(s) and solution when you paste the pictures with the text (I also see it here and there on the other pictures you've used - it's commen problem for many in the beginning ... until you find your best/right way of uploading) - keep up your writing ! -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on November 25, 2008 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

meme......she is aware of everything

posted by Star5_ on November 22, 2008 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

You have such a wide experience of life . Thanks !

posted by afzal50 on November 22, 2008 at 4:29 AM | link to this | reply

When at rock bottom, there's no way but up!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on November 21, 2008 at 10:57 PM | link to this | reply

Jen..You are loved have no doubt of that from my end...Take care girl...We all take bumps and brusies...God would not give us something that we don't have the strength for...Hugs for you and .. I can feel your pain...

posted by Wigopa_ on November 21, 2008 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

very brooding in heatache. You will find your strength again. Hope!

posted by merkie on November 21, 2008 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant words Jen...Laden with pain and sorrow ... I hope this is empathy talking... Take it easy darlin' Everything will be OK.  xoxo

posted by Sinome on November 21, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Mermaid
Wow, that was intense.

posted by calia14 on November 21, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply

powerful imagery about resilience!

posted by Luz_Briar on November 21, 2008 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

How well I know
There is a pain that's deep within; the one cannot let go.'The pain is chained into my heart and the weight hangs heavy there........Alone and chained with an anchor of pain.skye2008(The Weight of Pain) Yet there is an inner strength that relieves the weight and dissolves the pain away.

posted by skye08 on November 21, 2008 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

Bravo mermaid!
i really liked this!

posted by muley12 on November 21, 2008 at 1:32 PM | link to this | reply