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Grand work!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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December 11, 2008
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Rising the bar! It was deep home driven and touching. Ending man oh man!
posted by
Mystereo
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December 10, 2008
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breath-taking poem/story. glad you're back!
posted by
Luz_Briar
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November 23, 2008
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Welcome Back!!!
And thanks for sharing such an epic quest
posted by
lionreign
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November 21, 2008
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Oh my goodness! I am so happy to be reading your wonderful poetry again! I have missed you so much! How have you been other than real busy!? sam
posted by
sam444
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November 21, 2008
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"A tiny point of promised dawn..." Outstanding.
posted by
hardilaziz
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November 20, 2008
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Joseph!!!! Welcome back from me too... I have missed you so much! This poem was wonderful...scary and haunting but loved the end... coming home to your love whom illuminated your path with just the light of her love :-) ... the triumph of light over darkness... Excellent.
posted by
Sinome
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November 20, 2008
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Welcome back. Good to read your lines again. I like the movement in your poem and the love light leading you to your loved one.Excellent expression.
posted by
merkie
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November 20, 2008
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