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We forget our importance,

Here evil does stem. Clarity in vision Ron.Bravo



posted by merkie on December 29, 2008 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Rising the bar! Whoa! What a transformation seeds planted for human change!

posted by Mystereo on December 14, 2008 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Taxguy
Yes, the rhythm is impeccable which made for an easy read and your message of sometimes misguided heroics played out well.  

posted by Troosha on November 20, 2008 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

Tax guy
I liked this poem quite a bit, the rhyme scheme makes it fun to read, while the message is refreshing.  I love the name you picked :)

posted by calia14 on November 20, 2008 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply