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Whoa! I had to anchor my heart on this, was it a dream or reality, pause

posted by Mystereo on January 4, 2009 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

Pause pregnant with expectation.

posted by hardilaziz on November 24, 2008 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

A nice giddy poem ...

... teasing and urged for curiousity -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on November 21, 2008 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

This is short & sweet, Tina.....
perhaps like ur persona :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on November 21, 2008 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful. Thank you for this smile this morning.

posted by robinrn on November 21, 2008 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

I like this
it is enchanting

posted by lionreign on November 21, 2008 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Stars in the air, ain't it? :-)

posted by Straightforward on November 21, 2008 at 1:17 AM | link to this | reply

What a delightful read! Very good! sam

posted by sam444 on November 20, 2008 at 10:06 PM | link to this | reply

Loved the ryhme and meter to this..Reminds me of my dad "SFjoseph" work..Awesome write!

posted by Wigopa_ on November 20, 2008 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

 full of mystery!

posted by BC-A on November 20, 2008 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent poetic style! Very refreshing!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on November 20, 2008 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING MAY BE IN THE AIR, BEAUTIFUL FLOW TO THIS POEM, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 20, 2008 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Fantastic little piece my friend!
flowing with a little mystery; perfectly lovely; many blessings and thanks for sharing

posted by mariaki on November 20, 2008 at 5:11 AM | link to this | reply