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- Go to The River
Wonderful uplifting piece as the waves slap you around, enjoyed the river.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 2, 2009 at 10:56 AM
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An excellent portrayal of love gone wrong...Nice write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 30, 2008 at 8:47 PM
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Oh Yellowrose, you will regain your strength, there is no doubt in this. C'mon Cheers
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on November 30, 2008 at 8:33 PM
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I haven't figured this out, but I love it's obscurity.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 23, 2008 at 10:57 AM
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Is this code for 'fiery sex'? lol
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 20, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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I'm thinking that you are in emotional upheaval even as Kabu struggles
lets give each other a big hug. You're brilliant as a writer and wonderful as a friend.
posted by
Kabu
on November 20, 2008 at 6:37 PM
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suspenseful language*
posted by
BC-A
on November 20, 2008 at 2:55 PM
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Bummer, that is one rough river you are traveling down yellowrose! I like the imagery! Keep writing! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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Loved the way you melded the flow of a river with the emotions of life...Superb write!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 19, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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Roaring white thunder... brilliant!
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 19, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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yellowrose55
Sounds like Ruby is a wild river with rapids.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 19, 2008 at 8:36 AM
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