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Love in a nutshell and beautifully put.
posted by
pernesegirl1
on December 2, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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His as in God or man Let me know then I'll comment.
posted by
Mystereo
on November 29, 2008 at 11:09 PM
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Love is like static electricity, builds up inside then discharges to those around you
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 27, 2008 at 1:07 PM
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Sounds like love to me!
posted by
metalrat
on November 27, 2008 at 11:05 AM
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Compact and effective poem.
posted by
hardilaziz
on November 24, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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it sure is bright! thank you for the read and your words.
posted by
rubypoem
on November 24, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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good summary of the excitement involved!
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 23, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Outstanding!!!!! You captured so much in so little :-) Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on November 22, 2008 at 11:45 AM
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the electric love has gone.......frozen in this weather now!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on November 21, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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To find out...
try my "secrets of intimacy" :)...btw, i love vacationing in Goa, but have never lived there! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 21, 2008 at 9:02 AM
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as per your last write
Yea they can make immoral laws and call them legal and the Antichrist is referred to as "the lawless one".
posted by
Sudanym_
on November 21, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Its enough for those focused on touch. Some find love when it descends on them softly!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 20, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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Very few words...With tons of excitment!!!! Great job....Oh and I fixed that pic
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 20, 2008 at 8:59 PM
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cool if the electricity doesn't short out
posted by
Lanetay
on November 20, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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so few words such poetry. I can't do this so I am a great admirer
and really enjoy reading.
posted by
Kabu
on November 20, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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You know...
I took a couple of poetry workshop classes in college and in one of those workshops we were asked to compose a haiku. Seems simple enough...yeah, NO. It's tough. I wrote mine about a sweater. That's all I remember. Yours is much much better.
posted by
Fledgeling_Phoenix
on November 20, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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Electrifying, a very well chosen word! I think it gave the poem its impetus! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 1:10 PM
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Very true !
posted by
afzal50
on November 20, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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Well done--but I must say I hope he never touches me! Ha Ha.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 19, 2008 at 12:28 PM
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Tender sentiment, succinctly expressed...well-done! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 19, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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May the feeling never fade.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 19, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Sensational!
posted by
BC-A
on November 19, 2008 at 11:17 AM
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Straightforward
Loved that and it surely spoke of love
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 19, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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It certainly is my dear!
nothing better is there; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 19, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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i guess so..ive been there.
posted by
zhemarie
on November 19, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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Yes.. let the sparks fly!
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 19, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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Sparks are flying!
posted by
merkie
on November 18, 2008 at 9:34 PM
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Lovely!
Love your haiku.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 18, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on November 18, 2008 at 7:32 PM
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