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If this is the case then I truly want you have my dear Sinome! For this is wonderful imagery! Sammy loves you! xoxxoox
posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 2:32 PM
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Your poems flow with a magic and light
posted by
Smittenheimer
on November 20, 2008 at 9:33 AM
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This is amazing! The flow and the story are beautiful. Well done.
posted by
robinrn
on November 20, 2008 at 7:55 AM
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I love storybook poems like yours. It is like
shorthanding life and love.
posted by
Winged
on November 19, 2008 at 9:20 AM
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Sinome
I wish I could find your kind of writer's block luv if that was you in your poem, lovely
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 19, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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Nautikos, as usual, got it right. Noting to add my dear, the words just flow and flow, yours that is.
posted by
vogue
on November 19, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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Wonderful flow my dear Sinome
and a phenomenon we all go through at some point! Although I realize this is deeper than writers block; excellent work as always my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 19, 2008 at 6:15 AM
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sinome A poet spit fire speaks a poet lives in sinome I learn.
posted by
lestate7
on November 19, 2008 at 4:50 AM
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Wonderful poem .... so sweet and so profound !
posted by
afzal50
on November 19, 2008 at 3:29 AM
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Awesome poem.....
As usual!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on November 18, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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Sometimes silence rules the muse. Confused thoughts don't flow from your pen.
posted by
merkie
on November 18, 2008 at 9:43 PM
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I agree with Naut. You can't be writing of yourself.
posted by
Kabu
on November 18, 2008 at 8:27 PM
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Hey, que sera sera
posted by
Straightforward
on November 18, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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I enjoy your work , there are so many layers to each of these.. Thank you
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 18, 2008 at 6:45 PM
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Sinome
You are clearly not writing about yourself here, because the words flow beautifully...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 18, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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sometime, it's better to wait for a while to take a final answer!
posted by
Star5_
on November 18, 2008 at 6:12 PM
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I GUESS ALOT OF WRITERS HAVE BEEN THERE, NEEDING TO WRITE AND NOT BEING ABLE TO AND FEELING WHAT IS THE USE, BUT I HAVE FOUND THROUGH THOSE STRUGGLES, ALL THE QUESTIONS FIND ANSWERS, MAY YOUR GOOD HEART WRITE ON, THANKS, KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on November 18, 2008 at 5:10 PM
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An honestly poem ...
... by struggling it stopps ... relaxation is a difficult art but, worthwhile to work with (in a relaxed way) when the results is that the channel opens - to let go is a kind key that pays back - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 18, 2008 at 4:09 PM
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To have a person connect with that side of you...
...is intoxicating and you hope that person to be "the one." I still do, so I'm royally screwed!
posted by
metalrat
on November 18, 2008 at 3:36 PM
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