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It might be titled Stale but I found great hope in the closing couplet:
The hope of better times
Full of passion words and rhymes Truly wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
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November 19, 2008
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Life is so routine for most people...
...the challenge is in finding ways to spice it up.
Your poem excellently relates the monotony of everyday life.
posted by
metalrat
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November 17, 2008
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Honest, raw and warm... I like your style.
posted by
yellowrose55
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November 17, 2008
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Beautiful words...beautiful !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
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November 17, 2008
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So relatable..Excellently conveyed..
posted by
PoetRaye
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November 17, 2008
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Poignant and drenched in hidden feelings. One of the best of yours I have read so far :-)
posted by
Sinome
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November 16, 2008
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