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Amazing Haiku some much feeling in a small punch.
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Mystereo
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Re: Hi Sam-you truly flatter me! (not sure if that's the correct words)-
Thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 21, 2008
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Hey Chris! I liked trust and forgiveness abide! Wonderful line! sam
posted by
sam444
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November 20, 2008
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Re: Chris, I would much prefer...
Hello metalrat-Thank you so much for your comment-I appreciate that. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 19, 2008
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Re: Hello wigopa and thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 19, 2008
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Chris, I would much prefer...
...that faith, trust and forgiveness abide on more solid ground.
Unfortunately, though, your excellent Haiku is closer to the truth.
posted by
metalrat
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November 19, 2008
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A most excellently painted picture....Wonderful work!
posted by
Wigopa_
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November 18, 2008
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Re: Hi TAPS-yes you have said it before-thank you kindly-I'm pleased.
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 18, 2008
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I love your haikus. I think I've said that before. This one is very good.
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TAPS.
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November 18, 2008
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Re:Thank you so much Sinome! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 18, 2008
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Re: very pretty as usual.....
Many thanks Star! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 18, 2008
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Beautiful Haiku Chris. Love the way you install so much meaning into three little lines. Great job!
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Sinome
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November 17, 2008
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very pretty as usual.....
posted by
9STAR
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November 17, 2008
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Re: Building castles out of sand, or in the air....
Many thanks indeed Ash--how kind of you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: Scramble
This one had a 'twist in the tail' Troosha-I never 'saw' your second suggestion.Well done and Thank you.Chris.
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Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: Thank you so much OTA. Chris.
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Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: This is a beauty indeed my dear Chris
Thank you mariaki and you too-have a great week
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Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: Many thanks merkie. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: So love is like a castle in the sand that can collapse?
No-Staightforward--some or most of my Haiku's-have a kind of 'twist in the tail'? Chris.
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Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: So well done!
Bless you teddy. Chris.
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Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Re: Thank you Lustorlove. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 17, 2008
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Building castles out of sand, or in the air....
takes imagination & courage...and you, my wise friend, have both...well-said! - Ash :)
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ash_pradhan
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November 17, 2008
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Scramble
As Straightforward said “castles in the sand” might suggest that love is only temporary but it could also suggest we make castles out of all the tiny grains….
posted by
Troosha
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November 17, 2008
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I had missed reading your haiku Chris, I am glad that you are back. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
OTA.
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November 17, 2008
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This is a beauty indeed my dear Chris
beautiful sentiments my friend; many blessings and thanks - have a super week
posted by
mariaki
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November 17, 2008
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Great haiku with an interesting close in castles of sand.I am amazed at how much three short line can express!
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merkie
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November 16, 2008
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So love is like a castle in the sand that can collapse?
posted by
Straightforward
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November 16, 2008
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So well done!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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November 16, 2008
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very interesting
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lustorlove
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November 16, 2008
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