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Amazing Haiku some much feeling in a small punch.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 3, 2009 at 7:08 PM
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Re: Hi Sam-you truly flatter me! (not sure if that's the correct words)-
Thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 21, 2008 at 6:08 AM
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Hey Chris! I liked trust and forgiveness abide! Wonderful line! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 20, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Re: Chris, I would much prefer...
Hello metalrat-Thank you so much for your comment-I appreciate that. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 19, 2008 at 12:13 PM
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Re: Hello wigopa and thank you so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 19, 2008 at 12:12 PM
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Chris, I would much prefer...
...that faith, trust and forgiveness abide on more solid ground.
Unfortunately, though, your excellent Haiku is closer to the truth.
posted by
metalrat
on November 19, 2008 at 10:04 AM
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A most excellently painted picture....Wonderful work!
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 18, 2008 at 5:16 PM
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Re: Hi TAPS-yes you have said it before-thank you kindly-I'm pleased.
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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I love your haikus. I think I've said that before. This one is very good.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 18, 2008 at 3:23 AM
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Re:Thank you so much Sinome! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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Re: very pretty as usual.....
Many thanks Star! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 18, 2008 at 2:49 AM
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Beautiful Haiku Chris. Love the way you install so much meaning into three little lines. Great job!
posted by
Sinome
on November 17, 2008 at 8:58 PM
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very pretty as usual.....
posted by
Star5_
on November 17, 2008 at 7:32 PM
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Re: Building castles out of sand, or in the air....
Many thanks indeed Ash--how kind of you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:22 PM
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Re: Scramble
This one had a 'twist in the tail' Troosha-I never 'saw' your second suggestion.Well done and Thank you.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:20 PM
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Re: Thank you so much OTA. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:19 PM
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Re: This is a beauty indeed my dear Chris
Thank you mariaki and you too-have a great week
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:18 PM
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Re: Many thanks merkie. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:17 PM
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Re: So love is like a castle in the sand that can collapse?
No-Staightforward--some or most of my Haiku's-have a kind of 'twist in the tail'? Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:17 PM
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Re: So well done!
Bless you teddy. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:16 PM
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Re: Thank you Lustorlove. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on November 17, 2008 at 1:15 PM
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Building castles out of sand, or in the air....
takes imagination & courage...and you, my wise friend, have both...well-said! - Ash :)
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 17, 2008 at 9:49 AM
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Scramble
As Straightforward said “castles in the sand” might suggest that love is only temporary but it could also suggest we make castles out of all the tiny grains….
posted by
Troosha
on November 17, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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I had missed reading your haiku Chris, I am glad that you are back. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 17, 2008 at 3:06 AM
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This is a beauty indeed my dear Chris
beautiful sentiments my friend; many blessings and thanks - have a super week
posted by
mariaki
on November 17, 2008 at 3:03 AM
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Great haiku with an interesting close in castles of sand.I am amazed at how much three short line can express!
posted by
merkie
on November 16, 2008 at 10:56 PM
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So love is like a castle in the sand that can collapse?
posted by
Straightforward
on November 16, 2008 at 5:00 PM
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So well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 16, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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very interesting
posted by
Lanetay
on November 16, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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