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Awsome! You wrote this well smoothed the flow the ending oh my God! Kill It

Your ending to this poem broke the mold of ending. Whoa!

posted by Mystereo on December 14, 2008 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply

WoW .......jake, it's very touching

posted by 9STAR on December 3, 2008 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

WoW .......jake, it's very touching

posted by 9STAR on December 3, 2008 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful and touching

posted by hazel_st_cricket on November 14, 2008 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely expressed..

 

posted by PoetRaye on November 14, 2008 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

Jake,  good poetry. . . be careful of spelling and verb tenses. . . my writer's group always gets me on those too

posted by sintia56 on November 14, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

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So true, yes I believe you are right but such has already happened, I have found my other mate but my past experience leads me to write these poems so that others may understand that they are not alone no matter how much it feels that way.

thanks for your thoughts keep'em coming.

J.

posted by drakeb on November 13, 2008 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

All You Wrote

It sounds to me, like the other was out for one thing. A hot Summer fling. The best cure for Heartache, is a new mate. 

posted by demultiflex on November 13, 2008 at 10:55 PM | link to this | reply

just hangin there, will get better for both of you!

posted by 9STAR on November 13, 2008 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply