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You have a long and short range gift so much power packed into the read.

posted by Mystereo on February 11, 2009 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Cool verse I like it

posted by jefco on November 17, 2008 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

Alliterations with wide open window of expression.

posted by merkie on November 14, 2008 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Right on! This is fantastic! sam

posted by sam444 on November 13, 2008 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on November 13, 2008 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully done my dear
and I agree with Troosha, very cleverly worded; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on November 13, 2008 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Ruby
“The meaningless of one” ….      Clever piece, Ruby!

posted by Troosha on November 13, 2008 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply