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Amazing simply amazing how can I not feel with all you share can feel stare

You are just to much to bare I have been hit from all side you really bring it to life.

posted by Mystereo on December 13, 2008 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

I hesitate to say that I feel this

as your stare hurts

as I am sure

you hurt too

so let me soften your gaze

as my hand strokes a soothing

river through your hair

Love,

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on November 13, 2008 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

sadly beautiful. very impressed with the flow of this one, mermaid

posted by Luz_Briar on November 13, 2008 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful!and with the pictures it creates to me an almost mystical vision.truly lovely. thank you.

posted by rubypoem on November 13, 2008 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

Highly touching words .....

posted by afzal50 on November 13, 2008 at 3:46 AM | link to this | reply

I FEEL this poem, Jen...

...and the picture with it is absolutely haunting.

posted by metalrat on November 12, 2008 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

May the vibrations of the kindness and love you send to others,

be multiplied a million times.

May your soul be filled with happiness and peace beyond compare.

May each day dawn with Grace and Ease walking by your side.

May each day bring surprises of the wonderful things and fill your heart with gladness. skye2008(Pray of Love)

posted by skye08 on November 12, 2008 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

Hmmmnnnn! Girls looking like you feel like this? lol

posted by Soul_Builder101 on November 12, 2008 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

Purple Mermaid

I love the poem; however, it is terribly sad. You have the right to speak out. You do no have to remain silent. You can be whole and full of your own beauty of body, mind and soul in an alone position. I pray life becomes happy and strong. Be blessed beautiful lady.

posted by Justi on November 12, 2008 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful photoes for the sad poem.

posted by Baf4yoo on November 12, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

Yes ... loneliness can be cruel ...

... it's all how we take it - it's a double-edged sword where pain may grow when the suffering is touching the pity-me patterns but ... loneliness can be as a king/queen of freedom where the luxury of being able to completely taking own decicions can lead to the best way of development.

The strongest person in the world is the one who stands alone (said the author Henrik Ibsen) - yes ... it's a challenge ... a challenge to be strong - - genio