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Awsome! Diamonds, jewels and seeds for change in humans gifted words.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 11:21 AM
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superb poem
Very well done... I write that way myself most of the time
posted by
lionreign
on November 12, 2008 at 8:54 AM
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Your words put together in special ways are as good as any picture,
as enticing as any dance.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 11, 2008 at 10:52 AM
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Krisles
What would we ever do - particularly those of us who have words tumbling and rumbling around our heads constantly - do without the magic of words! Great piece!
posted by
Troosha
on November 9, 2008 at 2:45 PM
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Love your inter-positions while govening the poem from the ouside in--quite a task in itself to keep all the parts moving while you, seemingly, remain the same. I felt this tension right thru, and wasn't dissapointed, and almost felt I was writing the poem myself with new words of perception.
posted by
jfm32
on November 9, 2008 at 11:22 AM
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Excellent Krisles .Write on and right on!
posted by
merkie
on November 9, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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Outstanding! The congruity is amazing! Very well written! Bravo and huge kudos! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 9, 2008 at 1:41 AM
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Your writing
Was well written, from the heart. That's what it's about.
posted by
demultiflex
on November 8, 2008 at 11:23 PM
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Awww sweetie... you got it now! You has described the way I feel about writing. ( and I see Teddy agrees as well :-)).. and in such a beautifully written poem too :-) Great job!
posted by
Sinome
on November 8, 2008 at 7:51 PM
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Exactly!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 8, 2008 at 5:30 PM
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