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I'm leaving you for now I can't take no more so deep and fullfilling. Full!
You know I don't really have to say, but I'll say it anyway your are so gifted. WHOA!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 18, 2008 at 8:01 PM
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you apply sage to your writing and the spice of wisdom is tangy in words. Life can be a disappointing place to the sensitive one. Excellent.
posted by
merkie
on November 3, 2008 at 8:24 AM
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I'm reaching for the now, the present to tell you , you
are a great writer and the bloggers love you.........
posted by
Samantha39
on November 2, 2008 at 2:14 PM
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interesting peotic analysis of 'seize the day' love.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 1, 2008 at 11:00 PM
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A beautiful poem ...
... yes ... love is also pain in our world, a teacher that makes us grow to value love even more when it's present - I believe always being present is a good way to really appreciate the intensity and happiness of love ... when gone, memories of love can be strong if present had gratitude - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on November 1, 2008 at 1:04 PM
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Echo again and echo
I like the now...it is the only time we are sure of...lovely...that is why i lose no time in telling you that you are precious and you hold a special place in my heart...love
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on November 1, 2008 at 12:51 PM
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It must be
an epidemic of sadness in the heart. It is hard to find an inner smile to radiate outward to be returned to me and feel the love from my inner core for myself also. Hope your inner smile will warm your core love to radiate outward so much will return to you.
posted by
skye08
on November 1, 2008 at 3:08 AM
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Absolutely a beautiful poem. So much pathos! Why, whatever happened to you Jen? Marta says "hope you're feeling better"??? I too send you the same wishes with
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on October 31, 2008 at 10:16 PM
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You seem to have a line into my heart... BEautiful poem Jen...and your words are so true... Hope you are feeling better :-)
posted by
Sinome
on October 31, 2008 at 10:09 PM
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you said....
posted by
Star5_
on October 31, 2008 at 7:07 PM
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