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Singins a song of sadness and longing for that special love ....Lonley in time  poignant with heartbreak . Next to healing!

posted by merkie on November 3, 2008 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

The problem may maybe be ...

... to be or not to be ? - the wounds of longing is deep as any ocean but, contradiction can make the suffering of the longing worse ... -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on November 1, 2008 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

awesome
truly wonderful...very touching

posted by Jenipher on October 31, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful and true! Finally have a chance to catch up on your fabulous work

posted by Katray2 on October 31, 2008 at 12:54 PM | link to this | reply

So it goes til time shall be no more
As we let the ego go and illuminate our spirit from within, time and space shall be no more  Beautiful poem

posted by skye08 on October 31, 2008 at 2:43 AM | link to this | reply

Touching poem indeed ....

posted by afzal50 on October 29, 2008 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

it's what you say about longing.   feeling watched doesn't help either...

posted by Luz_Briar on October 29, 2008 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Remember dear Jen that time is not what passes it is life which runs on, so live it instead of worrying  about what time is doing sweetie.  I hope you are feeling better and resting and getting even more beautiful and sweet.  Beautiful poem!

posted by Sinome on October 29, 2008 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

feel better my dear....

posted by Star5_ on October 29, 2008 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply