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Master piece! For self awareness only you truely love you. Complete.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 14, 2008 at 7:36 PM
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swaggery words oblique.
Stay out of wine
keeps you out of line
faulty sense of being intense.
alcohol with destroy you.
It attrophies the brain cells.
Translation --dead for the rest of your life. Pickled and dead cells from the alcohol.
I'm a doctor and I know this scientifically.
This has scattered your ideas and left the poem without a sense of completeness. Simply a group of phrases from an altered state.
posted by
michaudblaine
on November 29, 2008 at 8:34 PM
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A nice read..
to end a busy day..
posted by
orcalion
on November 10, 2008 at 9:31 AM
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Affirmative independence in a wonderful ambiance! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 30, 2008 at 2:25 PM
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a quiet mood ****
and quiet language that quenches **** w/TLC, BCA **** Bill*s Wave**** Blog on
posted by
BC-A
on October 30, 2008 at 10:33 AM
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Re: Ray
thank you
posted by
raybute
on October 30, 2008 at 4:18 AM
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Re: cocktails on my deck
thank
posted by
raybute
on October 30, 2008 at 4:17 AM
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Hi RAy this sounds so relaxing.Good share classy lady!
posted by
merkie
on October 29, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Ray
Now those are the words of a women who sounds comfortable in her own skin! Great piece!
posted by
Troosha
on October 29, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 29, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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