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Aggrivate the wound and then talk. I like it! sam
posted by
sam444
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October 21, 2008
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There's something I like about this poem, but I can't name it!
posted by
Straightforward
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October 21, 2008
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Luz, a genuinely honest chit chat does hurt at times, but it's usually
worth it.
..
(but then there are times when we think talking is the answer, and it probably still is, but our timing isn't right)
posted by
Rumor
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October 21, 2008
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...absolutely!
...if the world would just sit down and talk... they might just find out how similar we all are... and that we're all one...
posted by
MasonGarrett
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October 20, 2008
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unique
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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October 20, 2008
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THanks, Bhaskar!!
'alienating beauty'. i like that.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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October 20, 2008
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Luz
" ... expect writhing flesh to retaliate with t
he process of healing over the hand against it.
Let us aggravate the wound!
Let us talk!". Anger, frustrationm passion, and the balm of healing in "Let us talk", presented with an alienated beauty. BRAVO! 
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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October 20, 2008
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