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Purple Mermaid11:

You are such an awe inspiring poet. I am truly sorry about this. How sad and how callous.

posted by Justi on October 22, 2008 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply

had me the whole way. I hurt inside after i read it.

posted by FaneXe on October 22, 2008 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Purple Mermaid, I agree.

Long since you dropped by.

posted by Straightforward on October 21, 2008 at 7:41 PM | link to this | reply

Love is blind

deaf and dumb at times.  The Prince of Rutt though not married to anyone else cultivated other relationships that I didn't know about or refused to see until the death of our marriage.  I found true love only comes from within and radiates outwardly to a attract your true love to you.  May your cousin be blessed.

posted by skye08 on October 21, 2008 at 2:54 AM | link to this | reply

that is one of the worst things that could happen to someone's heart. i wish the best for your friend

posted by Luz_Briar on October 20, 2008 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

a beautiful melancholic remembrance that someone will identify w/ love***

posted by BC-A on October 20, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

Heartwrenching yet flowing profound..

posted by PoetRaye on October 20, 2008 at 8:21 AM | link to this | reply

mermaid.......

posted by 9STAR on October 20, 2008 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

What a terrible situation. What a lovely poem dedicated to your cousin's pain.

posted by vogue on October 19, 2008 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

So passionate and so meaningful .....

posted by afzal50 on October 19, 2008 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply