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You are a very fine writer. I enjoy your work very much! You can hold my attention! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 19, 2008 at 5:06 AM
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what an easy read
effortless. the suspence promises to break at the right spot. can't wait for the next part.
posted by
bythewindowsill
on October 19, 2008 at 4:10 AM
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Oh dear... Will it be her? Where is the daughter? Still wondering why he didn't know about the parents move... Tell me more!
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 19, 2008 at 1:03 AM
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