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Thats an amazing poem right there
posted by
Smittenheimer
on October 17, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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Sinome
I am awed by the power, beauty and strength of feeling in this poem - in spite of its reluctance to be daring...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 17, 2008 at 11:47 AM
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Get brave and do so with the prelude of a KISS, magnificent!!
posted by
sunsirae
on October 17, 2008 at 9:50 AM
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sinome this is absolutely different......kiss me in the morning, kiss me at
noon and kiss me at night........what's up and who that lucky one............
posted by
Star5_
on October 16, 2008 at 6:26 PM
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Really beautiful . . . I really got lost in it . . . Thanks . . .
posted by
Soaker
on October 16, 2008 at 4:05 PM
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This is so beautiful.. stunning..
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 16, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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And, of course, it is about love.....but it is the kissing that says it all for me!
posted by
Krisles
on October 16, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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How perfect......
There are few things more poetic than a perfect kiss.....unless it is a perfect poem about kissing....I absolutely adore this and will copy it to keep in my book of favorites....thank you for sharing it with us.
posted by
Krisles
on October 16, 2008 at 8:35 AM
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This comment is not really on your absolutely beautiful pome, but to say thank you for commenting on Sufi. What a very intersting baackground and surroundings you have and you have given me a starting point os to spak to dive right in. Interesting and helpful also your information about the author.
posted by
vogue
on October 16, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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How true! If only we could say the things we really want to say! Wow! I love this one. sam
posted by
sam444
on October 16, 2008 at 8:24 AM
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Sinome
Life is far too short not to be brave and daring (although I suspect you are) and an invitation such as this one should never remain in the depths of silence. Imagine - just imagine - reading this to a lover. Or maybe you have....
posted by
Troosha
on October 16, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Oh but you are very brave my dear Sinome!
It's surprising when push comes to shove what we are capable of my friend; superb piece here as always; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 16, 2008 at 4:58 AM
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You are so brave and daring indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
on October 16, 2008 at 4:31 AM
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Wonderful sensual and daring brave lady! A love poem like a soft caress and burning passion. Hmmm
posted by
merkie
on October 15, 2008 at 10:00 PM
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Perfect
posted by
lestate7
on October 15, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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