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Your poem is amazing as always ;)

posted by Lotus_Flower on October 15, 2008 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

It's never too deep dear Jen

we just need to have the faith to plunge in again and again; excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on October 15, 2008 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

how desolate for her  

posted by Luz_Briar on October 14, 2008 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Jen this was wonderful!  I never get tired of reading your poems...you offer so much and such variety of concepts... Bravo my friend! 

posted by Sinome on October 14, 2008 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes the surface is warmth personified but the deep reveals ice particles. Why is love blind?? Hi Jen good to catch up with you. I just found your calling cards. I tried to send you A birthday card but the email did not go through.Belated greetings to you and many HAPPY returns!!

posted by merkie on October 14, 2008 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

It's in the depth we discover what life is ...

... but it takes time to understand it -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on October 14, 2008 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

I like the depth and dimension of your thoughts >>

posted by afzal50 on October 14, 2008 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

You are a great thinker.

posted by EX_TURPI on October 14, 2008 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

It wasn't adulterous but

you have described it so perfectedly.

posted by skye08 on October 14, 2008 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply