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(((((( Jen))))))  So beautifully written my friend...xoxo

posted by Sinome on October 7, 2008 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

The life can be ...

... incredible cruel and, why ... the everlasting word; why -

- where is the beginning - is it a reason behind ... so many pieces in the jig-saw puzzle. The day I learned that every answer isn't for me to know, I learned to relax ... and accept that life has its own reasons -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on October 7, 2008 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

Wow! Makes me think...
A rose or two and
Woof! from the wonder dog and from me too!

posted by Whacky on October 6, 2008 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

A very Powerful story
    It's hard to deal with life at times, but if you have that desire to never give up deep down inside.  Some day it will turn around. The key is to keep your faith strong, and try to be optimistic about every aspect of our lives.  There is always someone out there that has it worse.  Very Well Told

posted by passionate_healer on October 6, 2008 at 4:03 PM | link to this | reply

I almost wondered
if this was about a famous actress, but I don't think it was!  Still, a lovely and compelling story - hope you're feeling better, darling Jen! Thanks for stopping by, always!!

Cee

posted by LadyCeeMarie on October 6, 2008 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

This is a story well told.

posted by EX_TURPI on October 6, 2008 at 11:45 AM | link to this | reply

 You send an important message for caring and sharing love*** w/TLC, BCA *** Bill's Wave*** Float on!

posted by BC-A on October 6, 2008 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Come over here, let's go for SEETHAR CONCERT!

posted by Star5_ on October 6, 2008 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful and poignant, as always....

posted by Troosha on October 6, 2008 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful truth wonderfully conveyed! Kudos!
 

posted by Katray2 on October 6, 2008 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

Well said ... my friend !

posted by afzal50 on October 6, 2008 at 5:22 AM | link to this | reply

All too true for some in this life, very deep in meaning and form. Conveyed well through this work.   Albert

posted by albe1 on October 6, 2008 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

A theme many can relate to my dear Jen
some get through with less scars than others and everyone has different levels of time it takes to heal but heal we do and on we go, usually stronger and wiser; well done my friend; many blessings and thanks and take care of you always

posted by mariaki on October 6, 2008 at 3:59 AM | link to this | reply

A very sad yet powerful poem; I can relate
We will always survive because we are spirits of great love and strength. Challenges of this magnitude are lessons of life that we came back into this life to learn how to overcome with love and forgiveness.  The hardest part is the remembering  of the lessons we are to learn and the actions we are to take.  This is why we have guides and angels with us at all times.  I can certainly relate to the theme of this poem. I bought the video, hat and t-shirt. I survived.

posted by skye08 on October 6, 2008 at 1:12 AM | link to this | reply

Some must endure a lot worse pain and agony than others.
We wonder why, but no answers come.
We only know for sure that life is not fair
and that things are better for all involved when we learn to share. 

posted by TAPS. on October 5, 2008 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

yes......it's our life, no one can stop us to survive

posted by Star5_ on October 5, 2008 at 7:20 PM | link to this | reply