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(((((( Jen)))))) So beautifully written my friend...xoxo
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Sinome
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October 7, 2008
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The life can be ...
... incredible cruel and, why ... the everlasting word; why -
- where is the beginning - is it a reason behind ... so many pieces in the jig-saw puzzle. The day I learned that every answer isn't for me to know, I learned to relax ... and accept that life has its own reasons -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
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October 7, 2008
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Wow! Makes me think...
A rose

or two

and

Woof! from the wonder dog

and from me too!
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Whacky
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October 6, 2008
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A very Powerful story
It's hard to deal with life at times, but if you have that desire to never give up deep down inside. Some day it will turn around. The key is to keep your faith strong, and try to be optimistic about every aspect of our lives.

There is always someone out there that has it worse. Very Well Told
posted by
passionate_healer
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October 6, 2008
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I almost wondered
if this was about a famous actress, but I don't think it was! Still, a lovely and compelling story - hope you're feeling better, darling Jen! Thanks for stopping by, always!!
Cee 
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
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October 6, 2008
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This is a story well told.
posted by
EX_TURPI
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October 6, 2008
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You send an important message for caring and sharing love*** w/TLC, BCA *** Bill's Wave*** Float on!
posted by
BC-A
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October 6, 2008
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Come over here, let's go for SEETHAR CONCERT!
posted by
9STAR
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October 6, 2008
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Powerful and poignant, as always....

posted by
Troosha
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October 6, 2008
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Powerful truth wonderfully conveyed! Kudos!
posted by
PoetRaye
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October 6, 2008
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Well said ... my friend !
posted by
afzal50
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October 6, 2008
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All too true for some in this life, very deep in meaning and form. Conveyed well through this work. Albert
posted by
albe1
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October 6, 2008
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A theme many can relate to my dear Jen
some get through with less scars than others and everyone has different levels of time it takes to heal but heal we do and on we go, usually stronger and wiser; well done my friend; many blessings and thanks and take care of you always
posted by
mariaki
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October 6, 2008
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A very sad yet powerful poem; I can relate

We will always survive because we are spirits of great love and strength. Challenges of this magnitude are lessons of life that we came back into this life to learn how to overcome with love and forgiveness. The hardest part is the remembering of the lessons we are to learn and the actions we are to take. This is why we have guides and angels with us at all times. I can certainly relate to the theme of this poem. I bought the video, hat and t-shirt. I survived.
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skye08
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October 6, 2008
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Some must endure a lot worse pain and agony than others.
We wonder why, but no answers come.
We only know for sure that life is not fair
and that things are better for all involved when we learn to share.
posted by
TAPS.
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October 5, 2008
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yes......it's our life, no one can stop us to survive
posted by
9STAR
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October 5, 2008
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