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Powerful Jack! I loved the close for I saw myself! Bravo and bravo again! sam

posted by sam444 on October 5, 2008 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

Your concluding stanza displays real emotion.

posted by EX_TURPI on October 4, 2008 at 1:13 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful indeed.  Poignant and deeply drenched in feelings.  Superb job!

posted by Sinome on October 4, 2008 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my god....what a powerful poem ......

posted by 9STAR on October 4, 2008 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

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