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Powerful Jack! I loved the close for I saw myself! Bravo and bravo again! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 5, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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Your concluding stanza displays real emotion.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 4, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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Powerful indeed. Poignant and deeply drenched in feelings. Superb job!
posted by
Sinome
on October 4, 2008 at 12:48 PM
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Oh my god....what a powerful poem ......
posted by
Star5_
on October 4, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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