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- Go to ~~~~~inconsistence, at a snail’s pace, slacks off the binding screws...
If we had continued in ...
... patterns we would be stuck ... we may try to resist as much as we can but ... chaos is a guide and a friend - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on October 2, 2008 at 3:54 PM
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Jen this was wonderfully written. Many could benefit from the wisdom of your words for they forget to look after their garden and get upset when their flower dies, blaming anything or anybody, the sun, the rain, the neighbor's bunny rabbit, for their lack of commitment. You are such a talented writer sweetie... take care of you and your two darlings who I hope are all better by now. xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on October 2, 2008 at 11:14 AM
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drifing
only when we let others pick from the tree which bare our love for each other
posted by
YBSP1
on October 2, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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No-one and nothing can burst your bubble Jen unless you let it......
wonderful work as always my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
on October 2, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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Lovely and thought inducing...
posted by
Katray2
on October 2, 2008 at 6:24 AM
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It is the Law of Attraction
Like attracts Like. If we have tended to the needs of what is important to us, then it is returned to us. If we have ignored the needs of what is in our life, then the same is returned to us.
posted by
skye08
on October 2, 2008 at 2:23 AM
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very nice, very nice
I like the flow.. good work
posted by
PoetUndone
on October 2, 2008 at 1:58 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Brickhouse dear....getting married? Not me dear....
Our 9th star is... in her dreams....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 1, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: hey, I am going to get marry on thanksgiving day.....
Congratulations! And by the way beautiful poety.
posted by
Brickhouse
on October 1, 2008 at 9:47 PM
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Re: Re: Re: hey, I am going to get marry on thanksgiving day.....
I thought so....
you....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 1, 2008 at 9:39 PM
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Re: Re: hey, I am going to get marry on thanksgiving day.....
I am going to marry the guy whom I got engaged on last thanksgiving....but it was in my dreams.....
posted by
Star5_
on October 1, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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Re: hey, I am going to get marry on thanksgiving day.....
Sue, you silly girl
...quit taunting me...you better be serious...tell me it's real and drop your # i'll ring you promise...if you're kidding me...I'd still hope and pray you really would one day find the right one...you do deserve to be happy dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 1, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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hey, I am going to get marry on thanksgiving day.....
posted by
Star5_
on October 1, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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Re: Again you touch my soul . . .
Thank you ladies....jacenta dear and sue and my lady cee thank you for such a wide understanding of my inner self....you are such kind spirited soul yourself my dear one...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on October 1, 2008 at 9:21 PM
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
Your affective poetry is awesome!
Thanks for dropping by and leaving all those calling cards you have left from time to time.
posted by
jacentaOld
on October 1, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Re: IF YOU HAVE BUILT FOR YEARS, A SMALL BREEZE CAN'T BREAK IT BABE.....
unless a crack was carelessly repaired or completely overlooked and an unforeseen force rends the fray -- it can all come crashing down in a whisper. Time can be an enemy as well as an ally.
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on October 1, 2008 at 9:04 PM
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Again you touch my soul . . .
A perfect blend of music and imagery but it's your words that make my heart tear up and my head nod up and down as I remember some been there done that s***. You are prolific and altering. What a spirit you are!!!!!!!
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on October 1, 2008 at 8:56 PM
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IF YOU HAVE BUILT FOR YEARS, A SMALL BREEZE CAN'T BREAK IT BABE.....
posted by
Star5_
on October 1, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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