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posted by
9STAR
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September 24, 2008
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You make me think of the sister I lost can it really be three years ago
already. Sometimes the guilt of living on while she sleeps just overwhelms me.
posted by
Kabu
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September 24, 2008
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The Autumn permeates the season with sadness as the rain returns to cool the way for change. Sometimes we need to pause and savour the change in sadness before the sunrise calls cheer forth once again. beautiful writing sinome.
images of golden & russet leaves!
posted by
merkie
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September 24, 2008
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thank you for you a poet
posted by
lestate7
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September 24, 2008
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I so adore your imagery. It is bitter-sweet but it is still a soothing aroma for me. sam
posted by
sam444
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September 24, 2008
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Highly positive and inspiring ....
posted by
afzal50
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September 24, 2008
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beautiful!
posted by
9STAR
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September 24, 2008
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AGAIN
WHAT A PAINTING YOU PAINT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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September 24, 2008
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Sinome
Awww... if this is truly the thoughts your are experiencing as autumn settles it, it's very sad. But then, we as poets, can simply take liberties so you may have used the onset of a new season (a season which typically resonates of sorrow or summer moments dying) to explore a darkened mood. Either way - another grand piece!
posted by
Troosha
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September 24, 2008
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So bitter sweet. Still, one has to believe in another sun.
posted by
vogue
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September 24, 2008
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Good imagery
a very well written and melancholy piece
posted by
lionreign
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September 24, 2008
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very interesting idea of the autum and love
posted by
lustorlove
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September 24, 2008
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Death and re-birth my dear Sinome
an absolute necessity if we are to learn and grow; many blessings my friend and thanks for sharing this superb piece
posted by
mariaki
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September 24, 2008
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i have missed you my beloved one...i love the transition in your pages my dear...and you seem to have found an even better drive and inspiration with your writings. They are awesome and amazing works. Bravo my dear...i'm so proud of you!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
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September 24, 2008
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Sinome, Don't give up on the smiles. Smiles make anything and everything easier and better. Ones emotions, attitudes, follow the smiles to the high road.
posted by
TAPS.
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September 23, 2008
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"Reach for something new" . . . . beautiful. And then the pain will subside. Love and pain
do stand beside each other sometimes. Love "Again".
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yellowrose55
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September 23, 2008
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