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Awsome write for reality check, walk around eye open can't see. Great!

posted by Mystereo on December 27, 2008 at 10:34 PM | link to this | reply

It feels like how I think if I get this dream that death is at the door.

posted by Straightforward on September 25, 2008 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

he has so much to give!

posted by Star5_ on September 25, 2008 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Death be not proud
Well written. So positive.

posted by hardilaziz on September 24, 2008 at 10:56 PM | link to this | reply

I really enjoyed this piece
accessible and uplifting

posted by malcolm on September 24, 2008 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

This is a wonderful close: he sees he has a chance to live
because he has so much to give  sam

posted by sam444 on September 24, 2008 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

genuine good .... thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on September 23, 2008 at 12:28 PM | link to this | reply

Each word you chose have such depth and zeal

posted by sunsirae on September 23, 2008 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply