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This is beautiful, Sinome.  It makes one feel peaceful and content.

posted by TAPS. on September 17, 2008 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Marvellous piece my dear Sinome!

True love quietly waiting in the wings but always there; beautifully written my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on September 17, 2008 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

Trust yourself and trust your heart .......Very true !

posted by afzal50 on September 17, 2008 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

I love your word play with color and texture  love ~ Blog on! BCA, Bill’s Wave

posted by BC-A on September 16, 2008 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply

This is so uplifitng and came just at the right moment for me. I feel very very low and thought I might just read a few posts to cheer me up and...happened upon this particular poem.

posted by vogue on September 16, 2008 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

Hey sweetie! I am so sorry I am behind. It is me now. Moving is tiring. I am saying hello and will be back in the morning to leave my thoughts. I will get that email answered too! Love to you.  sam

posted by sam444 on September 16, 2008 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

How wonderful, and so very true luv.

"Love can seem lost, but if  true,  its never far,
the right person for you might be right there.
Trust yourself and trust your heart,
it will show you the way back to where you were ...."

posted by WileyJohn on September 16, 2008 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

So sad for me to read I spent so many years alone in a crowd.

posted by Kabu on September 16, 2008 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on September 16, 2008 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

"Love can seem lost, but if  true,  its never far," ~ i can attest to this ~ ~ what a truly touching poem...as a tribute to one so loved.  I am on briefly tonight Marta and want to thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.  I miss you too ~ Elyse xoxox

posted by elysianfields on September 16, 2008 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

I love the idea that love is never lost forever, it's just hiding sometimes. 

posted by LillyHobbs on September 16, 2008 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

very nice, and very true. kent

posted by Riversidepoet on September 16, 2008 at 4:33 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

To believe in oneself and by extension believe we are “loveable”, is the only way to maneuver our way through life’s ups and downs.  For some reason a song by Seal came to mind as I read this or more specifically a line from that song;  “Love will help me know my name”…..

posted by Troosha on September 16, 2008 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful sinome .the flow of words carries you from sadness to hope. Excellent.

posted by merkie on September 16, 2008 at 3:47 PM | link to this | reply

Maybe just my feeling, but feel you are reaching into amazing work. and I especially like the stride...a painter in her internal rhythm, painting in broad strokes the visions of the concrete. Was a little surprised by last line. Was expecting: "it will show you back to where you are."

Hi, John

posted by jfm32 on September 16, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply