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I can only add to sinome. Where are you? Not unwell again, are you? Please reassure your undying fans.
posted by
vogue
on September 24, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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Hey Jen... THis is beautiful but where are you sweetie??? I miss you and I am starting to worry...
posted by
Sinome
on September 21, 2008 at 8:15 PM
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Clarity is sooo painful sometimes! Lovely poem
posted by
mentre
on September 20, 2008 at 3:41 AM
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great line:
I was a blind fool with a clear vision... loved it!
posted by
malcolm
on September 19, 2008 at 10:45 AM
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very powerful poem
posted by
Samantha39
on September 19, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Perfectly done!
posted by
Katray2
on September 18, 2008 at 8:05 PM
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Purple is the color that dipics conquering power a Leader!
posted by
sunsirae
on September 18, 2008 at 7:53 PM
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A very sad yet powerful poem
posted by
skye08
on September 18, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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Good one
Its was a power packed one. Keep up the good work.
Didn't see you for many days... started missing you. 
Take care.
Love,
Amy
posted by
freeflyinbird
on September 18, 2008 at 3:54 AM
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wow....how pretty!
posted by
Star5_
on September 17, 2008 at 9:32 PM
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Hello dear Jen
Wow and your line at the end cinches this...you're writing with even more depth ~
~ I had a few minutes to pop in tonight and read. I wanted to thank you for your thoughtful notes and comments. Write on Jen...your vision is indeed clear
~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on September 16, 2008 at 6:24 PM
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Amazingly true
It is so amazing the things we fail to see because we have sight and it is so amazing the things we see because our vision is not clear...wow
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on September 16, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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With foot surgery scheduled for Friday I’m lame and enlightened by you love .… Blog on! BCA, Bill’s Wave
posted by
BC-A
on September 16, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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posted by
mejustme
on September 16, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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Appreciated the poem. Sometimes we need to step back and do a self-
examination. Am I pretending? Am I wearing a mask? Living with reality is scary sometimes.
posted by
ChristianHorrorWriter
on September 15, 2008 at 10:46 PM
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Powerful
We all feel trapped in our lives at one time or another, and pretend we meant to be there! That's what I get...it's beautifully written.
posted by
LillyHobbs
on September 15, 2008 at 5:31 PM
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pretention can certainly get in the way of things
posted by
Luz_Briar
on September 14, 2008 at 10:27 PM
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Hi the Mermaid
Emotions expressed sincerely and powerfully, and this one, somewhat different from your style? But beautifully done. Long time no see. I'm writing with a just operated right eye, that's why, and am winking too.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 13, 2008 at 6:53 PM
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You are truly profound and powerful .
posted by
afzal50
on September 13, 2008 at 4:31 PM
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Yes ... fear is ...
... an powerful enemy that makes the fog too thick - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on September 13, 2008 at 1:13 PM
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strenght isnt always what its cracked up to be
posted by
Lanetay
on September 13, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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Very dramatic and emotional, kinda reminds me
of the saying, "whereever you go, there you are!"
Wingede
posted by
Winged
on September 13, 2008 at 10:58 AM
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posted by
RomaKay
on September 12, 2008 at 10:47 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on September 12, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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Powerful poem.
Some things to consider!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on September 12, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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APPREHENSION IS A CLOUD CLARITY A LUCID DREAM. yOU HAVE ME THINKING AGAIN
posted by
merkie
on September 12, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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We all have those experiences.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on September 12, 2008 at 2:40 PM
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