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I can only add to sinome. Where are you? Not unwell again, are you? Please reassure your undying fans.
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vogue
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September 24, 2008
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Hey Jen... THis is beautiful but where are you sweetie??? I miss you and I am starting to worry...
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Sinome
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September 21, 2008
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Clarity is sooo painful sometimes! Lovely poem
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mentre
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September 20, 2008
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great line:
I was a blind fool with a clear vision... loved it!
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malcolm
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September 19, 2008
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very powerful poem
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Samantha39
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September 19, 2008
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Perfectly done!
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PoetRaye
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September 18, 2008
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Purple is the color that dipics conquering power a Leader!
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sunsirae
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September 18, 2008
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A very sad yet powerful poem
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skye08
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September 18, 2008
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Good one
Its was a power packed one. Keep up the good work.
Didn't see you for many days... started missing you. 
Take care.
Love,
Amy
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freeflyinbird
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September 18, 2008
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wow....how pretty!
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9STAR
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September 17, 2008
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Hello dear Jen
Wow and your line at the end cinches this...you're writing with even more depth ~
~ I had a few minutes to pop in tonight and read. I wanted to thank you for your thoughtful notes and comments. Write on Jen...your vision is indeed clear
~
Elyse
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September 16, 2008
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Amazingly true
It is so amazing the things we fail to see because we have sight and it is so amazing the things we see because our vision is not clear...wow
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Color_Your_Life
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September 16, 2008
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With foot surgery scheduled for Friday I’m lame and enlightened by you love .… Blog on! BCA, Bill’s Wave
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BC-A
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September 16, 2008
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posted by
mejustme
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September 16, 2008
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Appreciated the poem. Sometimes we need to step back and do a self-
examination. Am I pretending? Am I wearing a mask? Living with reality is scary sometimes.
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ChristianHorrorWriter
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September 15, 2008
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Powerful
We all feel trapped in our lives at one time or another, and pretend we meant to be there! That's what I get...it's beautifully written.
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LillyHobbs
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September 15, 2008
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pretention can certainly get in the way of things
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Luz_Briar
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September 14, 2008
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Hi the Mermaid
Emotions expressed sincerely and powerfully, and this one, somewhat different from your style? But beautifully done. Long time no see. I'm writing with a just operated right eye, that's why, and am winking too.
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Bhaskar.ing
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September 13, 2008
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You are truly profound and powerful .
posted by
afzal50
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September 13, 2008
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Yes ... fear is ...
... an powerful enemy that makes the fog too thick - - genio
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ggXpress
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September 13, 2008
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strenght isnt always what its cracked up to be
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lustorlove
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September 13, 2008
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Very dramatic and emotional, kinda reminds me
of the saying, "whereever you go, there you are!"
Wingede
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Winged
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September 13, 2008
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RomaKay
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September 12, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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September 12, 2008
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Powerful poem.
Some things to consider!
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Kolekshuns
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September 12, 2008
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APPREHENSION IS A CLOUD CLARITY A LUCID DREAM. yOU HAVE ME THINKING AGAIN
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merkie
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September 12, 2008
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We all have those experiences.
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EX_TURPI
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September 12, 2008
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