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Thankyou so much!I appreciate you all and all your thoughts.  

posted by merkie on September 9, 2008 at 8:45 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie
I never realized life was silence - oh,how true but it doesn't have to be seen through a dusty window.  Silence, as they saying goes, can also be golden.  Powerfully reflective piece!

posted by Troosha on September 9, 2008 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

This is a fantastic poem! Well done indeed!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 9, 2008 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

A delightful piece my dear!
superbly done; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on September 9, 2008 at 3:30 AM | link to this | reply

This is so haunting
It just echoes in the deep places in my head.  Beautifully written

posted by lionreign on September 9, 2008 at 3:20 AM | link to this | reply

posted by whirlwindaffair on September 9, 2008 at 2:12 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on September 8, 2008 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful Poem!
 Excellent!   Well Done 





posted by Kolekshuns on September 8, 2008 at 7:31 PM | link to this | reply

Exquisite..focusing more on the inner light....
can help make those twilight years more enlightening :)! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on September 8, 2008 at 7:25 PM | link to this | reply

"I never realized life was silence" - WOW! That one line speaks volumes...
I've felt that way a few times myself......

posted by Rumor on September 8, 2008 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent flow and style, Merkie
 

posted by Katray2 on September 8, 2008 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

Very well written

posted by Kayzzaman on September 8, 2008 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply